It's A Slaves' World - Chapter 16

Kiara tells Aiden how she feels, see how that goes.
Comments on article "It's A Slaves' World - Chapter 16"
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Thinker I dont think you can remeber something like that. It has been so long and is such an unbelievable stretch from reality as you know it, I think I would be more inclined to believe that any momment I would just wake up from the dream 9/27/2009
lily oh come on! you mean she never remembers who she is? well that stinks 9/8/2009
vanessa its the Perfect,Beautiful Fairy tale ending 8/3/2009
ebony please write an epilogue! your story was really good and deserves one. please write just a little more! 7/27/2009
samantha LOOVE IT! 6/13/2009
se s awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww d vows were so beautiful..
dey r finally together.. woohooo.. man i love happy endings, nd dat was as perfect as it cud get
6/13/2009
Me ITS SUCH A PURE, SOFT, ROMANTIC STORY. ITS LIKE A FAIRYTALE, SO BEAUTIFUL... NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS... 6/12/2009
Britany I loved your story, so moving. 6/12/2009
Ysamar It was great reading this story and i definitely want a epilogue!=]] 6/11/2009
Janet Well done Ashley! I have really enjoyed this story. Please don't stop writing. Thanks. 6/11/2009
H That was such a good ending I loved it! Maybe in the epilogue you could also tell us what happened to both their parents...but loved it all! 6/11/2009
JKYLIE awesome story, i really loved it! it was different from the other stories on here, and that's what drew me into it. it was well written and the pacing was just right! i hope to read more of your stories! 6/11/2009
Shilpa wow this is definintely one of my favourites! =) 6/11/2009
tay tay /that was so beautiful...its exactly what I want my vows to sound like! Im in tears! An epilogue would be wonderful! 6/11/2009
Laura-beth Epilogue? It's a lovely story, can't see what you write next! 6/11/2009
MEETH Baby! U ROCK! THAT WAS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY:) WISH U ALL THE BEST IN UR WRITINGS AND UR LIFE. WAITING LIKE CRAZY FOR UR NEXT STORY:)... 6/11/2009
ShyGirL OMG I LOVED IT! twas gorgeous... thanks for writing it... amazing! 6/11/2009
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