It's A Slaves' World - Chapter 14

Kiara finally gets out of bed and Aiden and Kiara finally clear the air a little bit.
Comments on article "It's A Slaves' World - Chapter 14"
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lili i love the story hurry on the next chapter can't wait 6/10/2009
Roser yay! i love this story with a serious passion haha anyway i just wanted to say that i cant wait for the next cchapter and i do hope kaira eventually remembers herself at least a lil lol 6/9/2009
sam yay! love the story! great job! aiden is actually the sweetest guy ever. and poor kiara, to lose spirit and mind...sigh. 6/9/2009
Shilpa i was so happy when i read this lol
its going great!
6/9/2009
iti the story's doing great. really great:) 6/9/2009
Laura-beth This is seriously the top story on my favourite's list.
Aiden and Kiara are so well fitted... they belong together!
There needs to be something stronger than the pond that helps trigger Kiara's memories and to make it more realistic I think she should be still a little blurry about certain things that don't have a high importance in her lost "memories bank"...
Kiara needs to face her past before she can move on with her future!
I definitely think you should have a passion scene for Aiden and Kiara.
Also have an epilogue that is 1/2/3/4 years later, that details their life and her fully getting back her memories... and mentioning a child/children/pregnancy wouldn't be too bad either.
Just some ideas, keep up the fantastic writing!
6/9/2009
ShyGirL i love this story... seriously its my fav story i am reading atm... its bitter sweet lol... continue it... ur an amazing author 6/9/2009
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