| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| marissa |
Well I feel the same to but the thing I do is cut my arms everytime I feel like that |
11/4/2009 |
| Anonymous |
well that is exactly how i feel so i can't stop you if this is what you want to do..i would do it if that was how bad i felt..but i gettin there.. |
11/3/2009 |
| unknown |
i feel exactly like that.
i think im exactly like that girl.
it was an awesome poem! |
10/30/2009 |
| tricia |
this nice i am glad i got to read it let me tell u somethin i write poems like this one here an my friends dont like it either so if u wanna keep in touch my email address is triciahatesppl live |
9/22/2009 |
| Maria |
nice i got a mental image there lolz. kinda creepy but nice lol. |
9/14/2009 |
| Nikole P |
wow that's one way to die. :( |
9/13/2009 |
| shannon |
thnks |
9/10/2009 |
| bri |
i think this awesome! good job i love it! if its how you feel your friends can screw there self! thats just my personal opinion |
8/12/2009 |
| happy |
thats cool |
8/9/2009 |
| Zoe |
good one I like it it makes me smile :) |
8/6/2009 |
| miranda |
i could see how your friends would worry. but i like it. if my friend wrote that particular poem i would worry too...but i would still like it...keep writing! |
8/4/2009 |
| Nana |
Thats not back
Good poetry you really have a gift |
7/19/2009 |
| Brianna |
I like it
:) |
7/10/2009 |
| Kaleigh Fisher |
it makes since this is how i feel but like your friends they would worry and... THis is a poem that speeks out to the world |
7/3/2009 |
| geonauht |
the are so many lonely people in this world... You'd think it would be easy to find each other so we wouldn't have to be lonely anymore. But it's not. You're still lonely, maybe not actually suicidal, but lonely enough to write that type of stuff. My heart aches for you because I feel the same. |
6/27/2009 |
| Makenzie |
I HATE MY LIFE 2! but i deal with it and don't show it...well i try not to |
6/21/2009 |
| dhivya |
very nice i like it...this s how i too feel |
6/17/2009 |
| dhivya |
very nice i like it... |
6/17/2009 |
| mela |
this is how i feel it makes me feel better that somone else feels the same |
6/17/2009 |
| janny |
i sometimes feel this way |
6/15/2009 |
| cassie |
AWSOME! that was the best poem... you should write more! |
6/11/2009 |
| Taylor |
i really like this poem i am kinda the same except the whole knife thing but i feel that everyone hates me and i hate everyone and everything! |
6/11/2009 |
| shannon freeman |
bailay u know im not and yes i kno my knife lol |
6/10/2009 |
| Bailay |
u and ur knife anatomy! lol
dont b suicidal shannon! |
6/9/2009 |
| unknown |
WOW, thats kinda creepy, but good poet skilles |
6/9/2009 |
| Shannon Tyler |
I like that. I feel the same way. My bro overdosed about 3 years ago. He was like my only friend. Then after he was gone I found out who my real friends were. No one! No one was there for me. |
6/9/2009 |
| honey |
suck sorry try to work harder on it more feelings i dont feel like you got it...put more soul and emotion in it...i want to no how u felt right b4 u killed urself that would be a good start |
6/8/2009 |
| shannon freeman |
and my friends also find tht i am the most cheerful outgoing girl in the world so no worries :) |
6/7/2009 |
| shannon freeman |
hey thanks people...i am not emo or suicidal but i find it easy to right these types of poems and kind of enjoyable...after a day of skool i find it relaxing to write poems about my day..i have a lot of poems about guys because most of my friends are guys and people think i go out with them all so i go though alot...thanks for reading read more of my poems if u want thanks again! |
6/7/2009 |
| Hayley |
Wow. I really, really like this poem. I think this is a topic that people need to be concerned about more. But this is really good. |
6/7/2009 |
| your name |
very good. i'd say work off of the soul drifting away. maybe loses itself around the space of the body, disintegrating into nothing. something like that maybe i dunno xD |
6/5/2009 |
| thepoet |
it's a good one .
but plz try to find the sliver lining and cheer up |
6/5/2009 |
| Sammy Anderson |
I agree with heatherlynn. I also write tons of emo death poems, and some people have told me I am the happiest person they know. It's a really good poem. Good job! |
6/5/2009 |
| Micki |
its kind of way sad and emo. |
6/5/2009 |
| Heatherlynn |
Well I do not agree with the statements you realees on your poem but it is not saying that you are really going to "Close your eyes and say goodbye" trust me i have written a lot of death ritten poems and i am the happiest person inside and out. Keep up the good work. |
6/5/2009 |
