| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Nikole P |
Amazing poem. I do the same as what you said in your poem. |
9/13/2009 |
| charlotte |
it doesn't need to any more than it is because thats exactly what tears are...simple. There doesn't always have to be a reason for them and most of the time they are impossible to stop.
i liked this because it is simple and to the point.
well done!x |
9/7/2009 |
| miranda |
i think it could be better if you made it more...well...more. it's a decsent poem, but i think it could be made better. |
8/4/2009 |
| chasity |
there could be more but its g00d |
6/24/2009 |
| brittany |
Its a good poem |
6/18/2009 |
| b.p |
i love it cuz it talks about tears |
6/12/2009 |
| nourk |
Need more deeper words. sound like a rock star trying to write a romantic love classical song. But, nice try if you revise it will sound better. |
6/10/2009 |
