Vampire Love Story 4

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Bryanna I can find any other stories between 2-5 ! D: Im going quite crazy trying to find it, its a really good story. 7/25/2010
sona cullen your story is very romantic minus the few misspelled words but futher then that i absoulty love your story almost beter then twilight. 8/2/2009
shona i just started and i really love it 7/31/2009
Lulu I think you should focus on the mental part of their relationship. So far the extent of it has been perhaps that he is "chivilrous" and that they both have good looks (and fahsion labels). Those are not a foundation for a relationship. In order to make this believable you need to avoid making the same mistake that Stephanie Meyers made: you need to not only give them distinct personalities, but objectives, motives and conflict. You need to give them depth and dimension by making them like actual people rather than goregous fashionistas. They need to be interested in other things besides each other (and Ralph Lauren). 7/26/2009
poppy-lou WOW keep writing plz 7/22/2009
Author hey guys Number 5 is on its way out. just waiting on buzzle 7/7/2009
Mexine Love it 6/28/2009
Sherene Is there a ''Vampire Love Story 5'' as yet? 6/28/2009
Ny'siyah Secret You have a lot of grammer mistakes. You should proof read your chapters a couple of times before submitting it, other than that I think the story is good. 6/19/2009
author A thank you to Black Rose Precious and lily. I really needed to read what you guys said. I have been really busy with my little girl (she has been teething) and i had all these ideas of where the story was headed but because i haven't had time to type any up i now have writers block and in need of inspiration to get another chapter out. I also am in need of a new keyboard lol this one is not working to well.

if you have any tips please email me at stilletoslayer at hotmail dot C0m		 6/14/2009
Black Rose This is one of the best vampire stories i have ever read (and i'm not just saying that, its true) I really love it and think that you should publish it. Also ignore what people say when they are comparing it to twilight. Just because its about vampires and the girls name is the same doesnt mean its like twilight. I would have to say that this is actually better then twilight. You rock XD! 6/13/2009
Precious you go girl! finish what you started... 6/12/2009
lily PLEASE ADD MORE I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR A WEEK! 6/10/2009
author Stephanie I have never read twilight and the same name of the female characters is just a coincidence
I gave the story the very blunt title so if people don't want to read another vampire love story then they have no need to click on it.
I must be doing something right as each chapter is getting over 600 hits.
All good vampire stories have love and romance in them. They usually end tragically.
The person who wrote twilight is not the only published author who write about vampires and love.
If you are the author and want to serve me with some papers then do so as I know it won't hold up.
If you are just another person then back up because I am going to continue this story along with the help of another author.		 6/10/2009
Stephanie We don't need another stephanie meyers. Be creative. There cannot be another Bella and imitation Edward. Your characters will never compare to the orignials and you will always be compared. Create your own and unique vampire story. 6/9/2009
Lilly ooh so good! write more! 6/8/2009
honey LOVIN IT! 6/8/2009
nadz i love it plase continue 6/7/2009
Amrit Aw... I LUVED the ending, but I hope you don't get mad, because you kinda need to check your grammer and sometimes you write words twice like when you wrote "head head" around the middle of the story. 6/6/2009
love omg please continue. I LOVE THE STORY =] 6/6/2009
meredythe i like the story alot. i really really really think that you should edit before you post it. it gets hard to follow with all of your typos. 6/4/2009
kim hey great. that kinda gave me an idea. im goina start 2 help with the next chapter. i'll email it 2 you 6/4/2009
Rose once again wonderful story
some unanswared questions
typos and a little editing could help
but over all wonderful
keep up the good writing		 6/4/2009
Alisa NICE :D
loved it want more! and more and moree		 6/4/2009
Ysamar OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER WRITE IT QUICKLY PLEASE! =]]]]]]]]]]]] 6/4/2009
JKYLIE loveee this storyyy :]
Please continue!		 6/4/2009
Laura-beth VERY CUTE! it's such a sweet story... Val is hilarious, i love it when he talks like Bella's ex... Jensen is a tool! Keep up the good work! ♥ 6/4/2009
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