Me Without You

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abbiex thank you for all ur comments i fancy someone at the moment so hopefully he will turn out to be my night in shining armor soon 6/28/2009
shannon that is a really cute poem i love it 6/4/2009
the re-tard as i writ this to you, i wonder how i shall say it.
you peom has start, but no end.
you keep me here, unknown to what or whom you wanted.
thus it makes a little flustered,not knowing, if it was the love of your life, or just some handsome boy you saw, whom you so are longing for.
therefor dear Abbie, we who read your poem sit here dumbfound.
wihtout a clue, of what your dear knight might look like.
i truly hope that you might get you knight in shinnig amour.

yours truly

the dense poet
6/3/2009
Kourtney This is the shizzz
I love it
6/2/2009
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