Midnight Chapter 1
Comments on article "Midnight Chapter 1"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| GG | Too much swearing. But I like the way you introduced your characters. | 2/11/2010 |
| tullie g | this story is great | 11/18/2009 |
| cat kenny | i like this alot it's got great potential would be nice to see more got me from the word go with the dream awesome! | 8/30/2009 |
| tigeress | WoW this is pretty cool keep going! | 8/23/2009 |
| Gail | Good job, it was very descriptive. Please continue. Fellow author |
8/12/2009 |
| Kayla | keep going, I need to know what happens next. I LUV it! great job =) |
8/12/2009 |
| Amrit | HeII YAH! U gotta continue or else i'm gonna be really ticked at you :) | 8/3/2009 |
| vaneck | terrible! | 6/22/2009 |
| rachelle | oh my gosh i love this story please continue! | 6/7/2009 |
| James Byrne | Your writing is very good and realistic if slightly predictable. You should continue writing however try make sure that the person reading cannot see the next twist in the plot. I would give an example but I hope im wrong. Good luck writing looking forward to part 2. | 6/1/2009 |
| elisha | Love it so far | 5/30/2009 |
| Caitlynne | Yes yes yes keep the story going PLEASE | 5/29/2009 |
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