Midnight Chapter 1

From the author of Royal Darkness. Hey guys. This is a new story that I'm gonna start to write. This first chapter might be kinda boring but I'm trying to introduce some of the characters so don't get mad. It will get better I promise. DON'T FORGET TO COMMENT ME. I REALLY NEED TO KNOW IF I SHOULD CONT. THIS STORY OR NOT.
Comments on article "Midnight Chapter 1"
Name Views and CommentsDate
tullie g this story is great 11/18/2009
cat kenny i like this alot it's got great potential would be nice to see more got me from the word go with the dream awesome! 8/30/2009
tigeress WoW this is pretty cool keep going! 8/23/2009
Gail Good job, it was very descriptive. Please continue.

Fellow author
8/12/2009
Kayla keep going, I need to know what happens next. I LUV it!

great job =)
8/12/2009
Amrit HeII YAH! U gotta continue or else i'm gonna be really ticked at you :) 8/3/2009
vaneck terrible! 6/22/2009
rachelle oh my gosh i love this story please continue! 6/7/2009
James Byrne Your writing is very good and realistic if slightly predictable. You should continue writing however try make sure that the person reading cannot see the next twist in the plot. I would give an example but I hope im wrong. Good luck writing looking forward to part 2. 6/1/2009
elisha Love it so far 5/30/2009
Caitlynne Yes yes yes keep the story going PLEASE 5/29/2009
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