End It All
I wrote it as a song.. pretty much a suicide song...
| Comments on article "End It All" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| emo 101 |
dang thats really good i like it all thats sooo my life! i gatta nother one
its called my true feeling
forever i hid my heart in shame but all i could do i bleed the pain.you couldont see mt face in shame when i walked to school everyday how could you just walk away! beacuse i know you didnt change your ways i know inside your still the same
you think you know my pain you dont know crap living a life of lies and shame and lies thing i hate to admit
feel my pain feel my sorrpw living today with no hope for tomorow now my heart is broking n hollow the guilts far to much to swllow
help me get awayfrom this misery bring my life back to change your lies to be in your dreams so seal up my wonders and sticth up the seam.
ill mess you up ill cut you up dont speek a word its not enough forget the phrase forget those days beacuse i just cant stay away from you any longer i love you baby! |
11/8/2009 |
| thisgirl |
omigod! its a poem! |
9/11/2009 |
| wiseteen |
well dear friend think of this problems are always gonna be but u must learn from them and correct your mistakes just because u took ur life problems doesn't end cause like u took ur pain away ur love one's pain begins yes for a wahile they would cry until they learn with god pain comes and goes i mean why take ur life because of ur mistakes just learn from them and correct them well i have only read 2 of ur poems and already i can tell u r constantly wanting to die maybe u just need someone who is always gonna be there maybe someone to say my pain is ur pain and ur pain is my pain and we'll share it together and always |
8/15/2009 |
| lep |
yes life isn't great but the key to life is to keep going not to stop and end it i know what it feels like just to want to end it BUT DON'T |
7/31/2009 |
| sad and scared |
have you ever felt like you wanted to end it but you were to scared to? |
7/15/2009 |
| thisgirl |
yeah.. its a horrible feeling.. |
6/11/2009 |
| Becki |
i feel the same way you do! |
6/9/2009 |
| Mandy |
i really liked this poem. i write things like this all the time.. |
6/1/2009 |
| thisgirl |
uhm its not supposed to rhyme, not every song has to rhyme.. and i personally think it has rhythm but i guess u just cant recognize it lol |
5/31/2009 |
| thisgirl |
yes i do. im using Write Girl as my name, and thisgirlwrites (at) live . com is my email address (without spaces buzzle wont let me post links) |
5/29/2009 |
| BloodThirsty |
good song/poem. btw do have facebook |
5/29/2009 |
| kristen hogan |
this sounds exactly like me...i really wanna still end it like in the poem you wrote/typed...no one loves me..NO ONE..i know your pain casue i have it also...ummm..if you have a myspace please add me...:( |
5/29/2009 | |
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