Road Kill - Part 5: Reaper
Comments on article "Road Kill - Part 5: Reaper"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| Kayla | This story was TRULY amazing. I found it a couple of years ago and really enjoyed it. After coming across it once more, I saw things I didn't notice the first time. I understood more. Keep writing, you are AMAZING at it. And the title? GENIUS. :D | 5/24/2010 |
| liz | I don't like the fact that all of the girls died and nothing happened to everett. And I read all 5 parts. | 7/29/2009 |
| Eva | I really liked it, on the whole, please don't be shocked but Mr Everret wasn't that insane after all, Nikki was definetely a cold-hearted person so u could say he had his reasons! On the other hand, all serial killers do...Stil, so bad Tina died, she was my fave character. In conclusion, well done, it was great! | 7/28/2009 |
| Kayla | I loved this story! 5*! |
7/27/2009 |
| Michelle Gardne | I thought it was well thought out. I did notice a few things like her eyes being closed by the killer and then being open again but overall you have the makings to be an excellent writer. I couldn't stop reading each chapter! |
7/25/2009 |
| Sohan Perera | Awesome story, have you got anymore? Best ive read in a long time. | 7/2/2009 |
| mand | i liked it. the one little nitpick i have is when misty was killed the killer closed her eyes, but the were open again before she was chopped. it flows better if you remember what you wrote. | 6/30/2009 |
| zach | it was a very interesting and good story. i think the ending could have had a little more of what exactly happened to nikki. and also a little more after she was discovered. but overall, great storyline and plot. i gave it an 8 | 6/26/2009 |
| Amy | That was an interesting story. | 6/12/2009 |
| Jamie | wow. this was great. i was in the mood for some horror stories and searched for them on google. i found this and was hooked in the first part. this is great, and keep up the good work. | 6/11/2009 |
| Dwayne N | I like it. now where is nr 6.. | 6/8/2009 |
| Filmfanatic | That was really great. It wasn't overdone or cliched, and you left much to imagination, which adds to the overall perception of the story and the characters. It also stood out the way you balanced out murdering Price by bringing to the table the things she did. It puts the murderer into a different light, which i like. | 6/3/2009 |
| jay | good | 6/1/2009 |
| lilly | wow kept me very entertained haha i just wish you would put more on how you killed nikki rather then the other girls | 5/29/2009 |
| Nain | The story is very good. I gave it a 9 because I like it better when the killer's identity is unknown until the end. | 5/27/2009 |
| Natasha | Good. | 5/26/2009 |

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- Into the Dark - Part One
- Saving Autumn: The Cyclical Machine -- Part 1
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 8
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 7
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 6
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 5
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 4
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 3
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 2
- Saving Autumn: Two Houses Connected -- Part 1
- Saving Autumn -- Prelude
- Hell Within -- Afterword
- Hell Within -- Chapter Thirteen: The Survivor -- Scenes 4-7
- Hell Within -- Chapter Thirteen: The Survivor -- Scenes 1-3
- Hell Within -- Chapter Twelve: The Monster -- Scenes 4-6
- Hell Within -- Chapter Twelve: The Monster -- Scenes 1-3
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eleven: The Whore -- Scenes 6&7
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eleven: The Whore -- Scenes 3-5
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eleven: The Whore -- Scenes 1&2
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scenes 15&16
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scene 14
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scenes 12&13
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scenes 8-11
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scenes 4-7
- Hell Within -- Chapter Ten: The House of Lancaster -- Scenes 1-3
- Hell Within -- Chapter Nine: The Addict -- Scenes 8&9
- Hell Within -- Chapter Nine: The Addict -- Scenes 5-7
- Hell Within -- Chapter Nine: The Addict -- Scene 4
- Hell Within -- Chapter Nine: The Addict -- Scenes 1-3
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eight: The Becoming -- Scene 9 Part B - 10
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eight: The Becoming -- Scene 9 Part A
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eight: The Becoming -- Scenes 6-8
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eight: The Becoming -- Scenes 3-5
- Hell Within -- Chapter Eight: The Becoming -- Scenes 1&2
- Hell Within -- Chapter Seven: The Birthright -- Scenes 7-9


