Royal Darkness Chapter 5
Rani has just learned a shocking truth about her past and her past with Jay'den( who was recently called seth in other chapters so they are the same person with just a different name) She realizes her feelings for Jay'den just as an unexpected and unwanted person appears. PLEASE COMMENT. I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU'LL THINK
BY THE WAY. THIS IS A PIC OF THE UNWANTED PERSON. SORRY. CANT TELL YOU ANYMORE DETAILS JUST YET.
| Comments on article "Royal Darkness Chapter 5" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| tullie g |
this story is great kepp going |
11/18/2009 |
| carlissa |
you should really keep going because im pulled in and want more of this story because its so good. |
11/9/2009 |
| VERA BERRY |
Is it all the way to here? More like a cliff hanger! |
9/24/2009 |
| ducky |
Excellent, can't wait for next chapter. Please write again soon.
Waiting in anticipation. |
8/20/2009 |
| Ninja Timelord |
i cant stand your writing its horrible.
'the strongest on the earth? WT-h!
this so much crappy doo daa day crapp |
8/1/2009 |
| Writersblock |
I really like your story so far!
Before you post it though, just proofread and like 'pad' it out a little- make it flow in what's happening rather than just going straight this to that...well...if you understand my gibberish, that is!
Hope to read the next one soon |
7/4/2009 |
| millly |
this is so stupud i hate it! |
6/21/2009 |
| vanilla |
like it! plz do continue! love to read ur next chap! hurry! |
6/15/2009 |
| Jade |
not bad, it has a great storyline. you do need to edit it before you post it though, and be really creatiive. otherwise it's great. looking forward to the next chapter |
6/11/2009 |
| JoasterTheToast |
Hi, I wanted to comment on your story. I think that you should really keep writing. I enjoy your story more than a lot of ones on this website. Keep up the good work :) |
6/1/2009 |
| carlissa |
never mind that other comment i sent;;;
i realy love this story you must write more please;;
-carlissa |
5/25/2009 |
| Pandora D |
scary! and please don't swear in your stories. it ruins the moment |
5/24/2009 |
| amanda |
hey hope u keep writing |
5/24/2009 |
| alyssa sokol |
please hurry with the next chapter! |
5/17/2009 |
| Ashley |
Seriously? Whoosh and it comes back? That the best you can do? |
5/15/2009 |
| Critical |
Good storyline.
Only problem: you arent puuting it in a neat and creative way.
Example: "He moves into a protective position In front of me. I hear a laugh and it wasn't me of jay'den. I see a man walk out." What the heck? Walk out of where? Before posting, you should read what you wrote. Check for any mistakes. |
5/14/2009 |
| heena |
I loved it
Can't wait till the next one |
5/13/2009 |
| tia |
i think u let 'twilight' influence ur writing way too much but if u can possibly be a lil more creative with ur own ideas u could def show sum potential. i do like the way direction is headed tho! |
5/12/2009 | |
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