Royal Darkness Chapter 5
Comments on article "Royal Darkness Chapter 5"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| samantha b | i luv it plz keep writing | 12/31/2011 |
| Catlynn | Are you going to post another story soon? If you are, i cant wait. I love 'Royal Darkness' and 'Midnight'! I cant belive im saying this, but your stories are better than theTwilight saga books! |
8/3/2010 |
| Shantel | NICE love da series n da last pic wow cute! lol please post soon |
4/10/2010 |
| tullie g | this story is great kepp going | 11/18/2009 |
| carlissa | you should really keep going because im pulled in and want more of this story because its so good. | 11/9/2009 |
| VERA BERRY | Is it all the way to here? More like a cliff hanger! | 9/24/2009 |
| ducky | Excellent, can't wait for next chapter. Please write again soon. Waiting in anticipation. |
8/20/2009 |
| Ninja Timelord | i cant stand your writing its horrible. 'the strongest on the earth? WT-h! this so much crappy doo daa day crapp |
8/1/2009 |
| Writersblock | I really like your story so far! Before you post it though, just proofread and like 'pad' it out a little- make it flow in what's happening rather than just going straight this to that...well...if you understand my gibberish, that is! Hope to read the next one soon |
7/4/2009 |
| millly | this is so stupud i hate it! | 6/21/2009 |
| vanilla | like it! plz do continue! love to read ur next chap! hurry! | 6/15/2009 |
| Jade | not bad, it has a great storyline. you do need to edit it before you post it though, and be really creatiive. otherwise it's great. looking forward to the next chapter | 6/11/2009 |
| JoasterTheToast | Hi, I wanted to comment on your story. I think that you should really keep writing. I enjoy your story more than a lot of ones on this website. Keep up the good work :) | 6/1/2009 |
| carlissa | never mind that other comment i sent;;; i realy love this story you must write more please;; -carlissa |
5/25/2009 |
| Pandora D | scary! and please don't swear in your stories. it ruins the moment | 5/24/2009 |
| amanda | hey hope u keep writing | 5/24/2009 |
| alyssa sokol | please hurry with the next chapter! | 5/17/2009 |
| Ashley | Seriously? Whoosh and it comes back? That the best you can do? | 5/15/2009 |
| Critical | Good storyline. Only problem: you arent puuting it in a neat and creative way. Example: "He moves into a protective position In front of me. I hear a laugh and it wasn't me of jay'den. I see a man walk out." What the heck? Walk out of where? Before posting, you should read what you wrote. Check for any mistakes. |
5/14/2009 |
| heena | I loved it Can't wait till the next one |
5/13/2009 |
| tia | i think u let 'twilight' influence ur writing way too much but if u can possibly be a lil more creative with ur own ideas u could def show sum potential. i do like the way direction is headed tho! | 5/12/2009 |
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