Beat Me Till I'm Broken

Wrote it in French... all my friends liked it.
Comments on article "Beat Me Till I'm Broken"
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Courtney S. That was truely a very amazing poem. One of the best poems I've read in a while. Keep writting. 9/11/2009
crystal wow. i can relate to this one 9/9/2009
.miranda is this true? if not it's great anyway! keep writing 8/6/2009
ashley i am so sorry you had to go thu that thats inspring. ifyou need help you need to get it and screw ur parents just get help. 5/21/2009
Bonnie123 This is really good!
I wish i could write good peoms
5/14/2009
Nancy When i was younger i went through the same thing with my dad but the thing was I got beatten because of my oldest sisiter I never was wanted they only wanted her. My father told me i was a mistake and they never wanted me,so you better believ it i will see them in we they are DEAD. 5/13/2009
hidden melody 5 stars baby!
based on my life
5/7/2009
Waitingfordeath I know what it is like to get beat. My step- father beats me. I hate him.And he cant use the excuse of beer. He just does it to do it. He puts his arms around my throut, and picks me up off the ground. He dose it to my little bro. too. I try to take as many of his as possible. But sometimes i just cant. I hate to see and hear his crys. I cant wait till i die... but i stay to protect him... 5/7/2009
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