Indescribable

She sits in her room...On her bed...With the sharp razor...Cutting at her skin
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miranda o my god. i used to have blonde hair and wore nothing other than sweaters and jeans. god. and now my hair is dark, i cut myself, wear band t-shirts and i don't talk to most ppl. weird... anywho...nice poem 8/6/2009
Makenzie her hair changed color cause she dyed it idiot...use your brain smart1 6/25/2009
L. I like the last stanza, great idea and imagery. However, for me, the rest of the poem doesn't flow quite as well as it could; it feels a little choppy. Of course, perhaps that's what you were going for--a "cutting" rhythm. Personally, though, I think it would help if you cut out some "and"s, but I'm no expert :) 5/25/2009
Shadow this is good...it sounds like someone i know...great work! 5/16/2009
Anonymous How'd her hair change color? 5/11/2009
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