Home?

This is a song I just wrote and I wanted to get feedback for it. Let me know what’s up.
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mordy i like it and if you feel that way or anything. i do understand it. just keep writing... you are just showing how you feel or what your life been. 8/13/2009
lavanya its beautifulllllllll 6/2/2009
Ya boi There is already a song Scream by Tokio Hotel that yells scream in the chorus its too graphic for a broken heart kind off song 5/28/2009
RAE RAE ay kaleb i loved your poem it rocked! 5/28/2009
jzmout sounds like something that i would write 4/28/2009
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