The Pool of Savages

Comments on article "The Pool of Savages"
Name Views and CommentsDate
Rachel Sounds like a poem 7/8/2011
Tru It was alright I guess 7/7/2009
alan fry i thought this had zero charisma, spark, attitude, zing or pazow. you need to work on the suspense and tension i think. it made me thing of mcgonagall. 5/6/2009
Aaron Evans i really liked how you described the water and the bodies. very creepy, very cool. ;] 5/1/2009
raunak its good, fantastic and fun reading. 4/29/2009
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