The Creatori 5
Comments on article "The Creatori 5"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| evantie | this is incredible you should try and write more than just this one it is cool i really liked it. | 5/20/2009 |
| Me | Oh my goodness! I did not see that coming. I wonder how the ending will be like. | 5/2/2009 |
| jennyF. | Plz dnt stop writing this story. Ignore the ppl who criticize. I love all your stories! And this one if included. Cnt wait for the other chapters. | 4/22/2009 |
| Betsy Chou | l love the story, needs a bit tweaking with the dialogue and the words such as said, sneered, smirk (try to be more creative) just some helpful advice, well don anyways -max seems a bit delusional, i think its a little sudden with the mood change and the story about max wasn't really clear with callie and him -continue writing and don't worry some readers here don't appreciate good stories, yours is pretty good, others get a ton more comments but are just crap *i write sonata XD but im pretty late with the other chapters, but u probably don't care, whatever i should stop writing now tata ciao! good luck |
4/22/2009 |
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