The Creatori 5

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evantie this is incredible you should try and write more than just this one it is cool i really liked it. 5/20/2009
Me Oh my goodness! I did not see that coming. I wonder how the ending will be like. 5/2/2009
jennyF. Plz dnt stop writing this story. Ignore the ppl who criticize. I love all your stories! And this one if included. Cnt wait for the other chapters. 4/22/2009
Betsy Chou l love the story, needs a bit tweaking with the dialogue
and the words such as said, sneered, smirk (try to be more creative)
just some helpful advice, well don anyways
-max seems a bit delusional, i think its a little sudden with the mood change
and the story about max wasn't really clear with callie and him
-continue writing and don't worry some readers here don't appreciate good
stories, yours is pretty good, others get a ton more comments but are just crap
*i write sonata XD but im pretty late with the other chapters, but u probably don't care, whatever i should stop writing now
tata ciao! good luck
4/22/2009
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