The Creatori 5
What’s going on? Callie’s just turned 16. But things are weird. On her way home she finds out that two of the neighbor's sheep have gone missing. No big deal right? But then she finds them outside her house, dead. Then upstairs in her bedroom, there’s a beautiful man sitting on her bed. Callie’s life is turned upside down as she finds out she is part of a species known as Creatori.
| Comments on article "The Creatori 5" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| evantie |
this is incredible you should try and write more than just this one it is cool i really liked it. |
5/20/2009 |
| Me |
Oh my goodness! I did not see that coming. I wonder how the ending will be like. |
5/2/2009 |
| jennyF. |
Plz dnt stop writing this story. Ignore the ppl who criticize. I love all your stories! And this one if included. Cnt wait for the other chapters. |
4/22/2009 |
| Betsy Chou |
l love the story, needs a bit tweaking with the dialogue
and the words such as said, sneered, smirk (try to be more creative)
just some helpful advice, well don anyways
-max seems a bit delusional, i think its a little sudden with the mood change
and the story about max wasn't really clear with callie and him
-continue writing and don't worry some readers here don't appreciate good
stories, yours is pretty good, others get a ton more comments but are just crap
*i write sonata XD but im pretty late with the other chapters, but u probably don't care, whatever i should stop writing now
tata ciao! good luck |
4/22/2009 | |
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