Every time I See Him
Comments on article "Every time I See Him"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| becca | really good | 7/2/2011 |
| Nikki | Mya And Lulu Im Sure Your Not Perfect Either People Do Make Mistakes! | 2/14/2011 |
| Maya | Well i agree with Emily i thought it was good an it its rude to correct someones mistakes!Everyone makes mistakes nobodys perfect..Lulu! | 6/17/2010 |
| Emily | I like them and i thought it was ok to make mistakes i think ts rude to correct someones mistakes ...Lulu! | 10/29/2009 |
| Lulu | You may want to start a new paragraph everytime someone speaks so that it is clearer who is talking. Also, please read it over and note typos. (Always have punctuation inside of parenthesis) You meant "cluts" right? Because you wrote "clust" twice. | 4/18/2009 |
| Mya:) | this is wayyy tooo short | 4/15/2009 |
| Lisa | Wow ive been reading alot of stories today but this is my favorite! | 4/14/2009 |
| Miley | Wow i love your storys cant wait to read more | 4/14/2009 |
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