Royal Darkness Ch. 3

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ninja timelord this handwriting is very similar to crappy Stephanie Meyer's Twilight Saga. i hated her handwriting you write out the obvious and i think you should add some more detail, and less chat. 8/1/2009
Pandora D I love it! It is a little Twilight like, though 5/24/2009
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