The Sociopath

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Andrew Hope Would be more interesting if the protagonist was killing someone other than a prostitute. Seems like a walk down an overly familiar path. 10/5/2011
Stacey P I think it would be someone that had been ridiculed their entire life to want vengeance. You did a good job on this story. I think you literally have to put yourself in their shoes to imagine what they would be like, see, touch, smell,and taste. Awesome story! 3/28/2010
Gretell I absolutely love your writing and adore your stories its refreshing finding someone my age with your ability and creative vision as a writer keep writing i always enjoy reading your work with a heartful of love xoxo gretell 11/18/2009
dinn- wsaww wow i loved this story i have never read any thing so good
they way u went in and told us what he was thinking
i hope to see more of ur work
i really liked it
for a first time person
i dont think it is sick at all
it is right people really need to know what
happens when they get bullied for being different
they bring it on them self
8/19/2009
Whooo this is a great story.. atleast you get to know what psychos think.. great minds compliments great minds haha 8/13/2009
Eva It was good, though it ended kinda sudden, u know, i don't expect a happy end but any kind of end would be nice. 8/4/2009
Ines N. - Diaz I liked the description... perhaps I could have seen some dialogue... but all in all great! 7/2/2009
Lesley Very clever, intresting putting yourself in the first person position. 6/24/2009
Annette I like the vitriol, keep going, don't hold back, the vengeful victim angle is really good. Your character is a sociopath? Are you going to punish him at the end or resort to a post 9/11 the bad guys always win? 6/12/2009
x well it certenly got my attension 6/5/2009
MyMalicious Ignore the others. This makes sense and is logical in that sociopathic sort of way. 5/23/2009
Brina Wow. 5/21/2009
jen this story is i'm sorry but stuipid and sick 5/9/2009
Roxxie why did he cut off her breast, i didnt get that bit. you seem like a troubled soul. get well soon angel xx 4/28/2009
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