The Sociopath
Comments on article "The Sociopath"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| Andrew Hope | Would be more interesting if the protagonist was killing someone other than a prostitute. Seems like a walk down an overly familiar path. | 10/5/2011 |
| Stacey P | I think it would be someone that had been ridiculed their entire life to want vengeance. You did a good job on this story. I think you literally have to put yourself in their shoes to imagine what they would be like, see, touch, smell,and taste. Awesome story! | 3/28/2010 |
| Gretell | I absolutely love your writing and adore your stories its refreshing finding someone my age with your ability and creative vision as a writer keep writing i always enjoy reading your work with a heartful of love xoxo gretell | 11/18/2009 |
| dinn- wsaww | wow i loved this story i have never read any thing so good they way u went in and told us what he was thinking i hope to see more of ur work i really liked it for a first time person i dont think it is sick at all it is right people really need to know what happens when they get bullied for being different they bring it on them self |
8/19/2009 |
| Whooo | this is a great story.. atleast you get to know what psychos think.. great minds compliments great minds haha | 8/13/2009 |
| Eva | It was good, though it ended kinda sudden, u know, i don't expect a happy end but any kind of end would be nice. | 8/4/2009 |
| Ines N. - Diaz | I liked the description... perhaps I could have seen some dialogue... but all in all great! | 7/2/2009 |
| Lesley | Very clever, intresting putting yourself in the first person position. | 6/24/2009 |
| Annette | I like the vitriol, keep going, don't hold back, the vengeful victim angle is really good. Your character is a sociopath? Are you going to punish him at the end or resort to a post 9/11 the bad guys always win? | 6/12/2009 |
| x | well it certenly got my attension | 6/5/2009 |
| MyMalicious | Ignore the others. This makes sense and is logical in that sociopathic sort of way. | 5/23/2009 |
| Brina | Wow. | 5/21/2009 |
| jen | this story is i'm sorry but stuipid and sick | 5/9/2009 |
| Roxxie | why did he cut off her breast, i didnt get that bit. you seem like a troubled soul. get well soon angel xx | 4/28/2009 |

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