Stolen Hearts; Chapter Two

Cala screamed out in frustration. The NEX had gagged her so firmly that the sides of her mouth were cut and bleeding.
Comments on article "Stolen Hearts; Chapter Two"
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Ati I think it is great story and it is rich in words 5/8/2009
KathrineAmazing Wow this is really intereesting. I can't wait for more. BTW i haven't found ANY errors in it at all. And that's amazing comsiderinng when i post things i do a terrible job at editing! ha ha i can't wait to read more 5/6/2009
tina reads very much like an actual sci fi novel. keep up the great work! can't wait to see how the story unfolds and how/when Cala learns about her past. 3/24/2009
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