Water Front

I dreamt this one night 11/16/2008,
Comments on article "Water Front"
Name Views and CommentsDate
S This story has a great plot. If only, sometime in the future, you could rethink this story, you could create more suspense and description, as well as a more grammatically correct approach. Good job. 10/22/2009
Meee. Interesting story, could have been much better written. Better luck next time. 8/14/2009
lax ...
I have scarier dreams than this...		 4/19/2009
ana i agree..lady ur english is all over the place...better luck next time 3/30/2009
danny you have wierd dreams 3/24/2009
Nikkib Very poorly written. Difficult to read. 3/5/2009
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