Royal Darkness

Rani was born into a life full of expectations. She was the only one of her kind. Well kinda. She is the only pureblood vampire besides her mother. That was until her mom was killed. Comment plz. let me know what you think & if I should keep goin......
Comments on article "Royal Darkness"
Name Views and CommentsDate
cat kenny pretty awesome 8/30/2009
Pandora D I like the feel of the story. I also like how the idea of vampires is similar to Twilight. I don't understand the way the vamp community woks. 5/24/2009
Bryan Damn 'Twilight'...now every vampire story has 'shiny' vampires and the same openers.

The writing style is well done, descriptive and slightly clever i guess.

It's just...cliche'd... keep it up though.
3/17/2009
josefvz Great Interesting story. Please continue.
Just watch your grammar a bit.
3/13/2009
kim the next chapter wont be out until next week bc i have 2 work and get ready for tests... srry 3/5/2009
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