Alan

I wrote this last year...
Comments on article "Alan"
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jess this story is the best did you make it up or something
its fantastic !		 10/24/2009
Whooo i agree. there are so many error in tenses and spellings. work on it 8/18/2009
Kat Jones You need to work on not missing words, and your tenses (past, present, future).

Also, there are some words you really should avoid in writing like this, like 'anyways'.

Keep practising. You'll get better.		 8/10/2009
chelsie this story is fantastic i loved it ^_^ 8/1/2009
hello, operator I loved it! i actually felt scared at the uncle part 6/28/2009
Lesley Really good story, loved the Granny and your descriptions. 6/24/2009
Amy Getting a visit from the paranormal is scary, you see people for a reason and I think it is a gift. 6/12/2009
Rachel a good story, but many, many spelling errors. They really detract from the storyline. 5/25/2009
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