Ghostly Adventures
It's ghostly!
| Comments on article "Ghostly Adventures" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Shareen |
Nice Story |
9/16/2009 |
| emily |
very good !:) |
9/1/2009 |
| Celeste |
I am not a kid idiot operator |
7/28/2009 |
| Kerri Jones |
Legend Of A Women! |
6/30/2009 |
| Lil Miss |
Well, since you said its your 7-year old sister's story, then I'd say it's awesome.
I dont wanna exaggerate, but its totally awesome for a 7-year old. |
6/28/2009 |
| hello, operator |
It was scary in the middle, but the end was too dull, you know the part where bloody mary really appears.
You could have made it a better story by doing this:
Make mary bloody mary.
The gun was shot at bloody mary's hips. Which means, close to her legs. mary's on crutches. Her legs are injured too.
They have the same name, duh
You could have made mary disguised as bloody mary. If you would have made mary an orphan and with no siblings, living alone in the house under the eye of the government, it could be betteer.
The story really went downhill when kayla entered.
It could have been sooo
much better, kid. |
6/28/2009 |
| Owner |
thanks Kristen. I know it's not scary but my sister is about seven so. |
4/9/2009 |
| Owner |
I don't care what you say my sister who's about seven made it and i typed it and i left it how she made it |
4/9/2009 |
| hotiii |
its an awesome storiiii |
3/19/2009 |
| kisten mccarly |
great story |
3/19/2009 |
| kisten mccarly |
love your sorry but not scary. |
3/19/2009 |
| kisten mccarly |
l love your story but it is'nt a scary story |
3/19/2009 |
| Supa |
PUNCTUATION! PLEASE! |
3/14/2009 | |
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