Office Politics
A story about a woman and the weird things that happen in her office when se starts talking to a friend on the internet...
| Comments on article "Office Politics" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| K-baby |
it was ok but please write more |
7/5/2009 |
| Varun |
Nice story, I like it...infact I know someone who has been through similar thing... |
5/20/2009 |
| Angel |
I would have enjoyed a better ending... |
4/27/2009 |
| Nova |
It's a good story but it leaves me wanting a better ending. All great stories have a plot twist. In this story, Hurbert (spelling?) can be that twist but please include a "why"! |
3/30/2009 |
| yolande |
It seems the comments put you off writing and posting more of this story. Please don't let this happen. Nobody is perfect the first time around and I do believe you have the makings of a great writer. True, you need to use the spellchecker on your computer as the spelling and grammar mistakes tend to draw one out of the story. This is fixable. Your story is one with which many people can associate so don't get discouraged. Please continue with the story. You'll find you get better the more you write. |
3/27/2009 |
| Yami |
It was great...I can practically sense how Karen felt. |
3/20/2009 |
| angelawynter |
You have to be careful when you write these types of horror stories. Your story was indulgent and if I were you I would put it down for a while and re-write it again. You need to develop a better relationship between T&H before the 'fun' starts. However, you're writing is very good and you should continue. Please do not let me put you off. Anyone who can write like you do now can become a great writer. Please keep going. |
3/7/2009 |
| Barak JoMama :) |
There are many grammatical errors and some misspelled words. Please use "Spell check" on your word processor. Good story! |
2/27/2009 |
| bs |
ok story but you need someone to proofread your work-
misspellings and grammar |
2/17/2009 | |
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