Timestop

This is my first attempt at a play. I had a great time writing this piece. The characters are unlike any I’ve written before. It's a new way to think about Family. In the end I would like the reader to decide what happens. Please let me know what you think should happen. I'm interested to hear.
Comments on article "Timestop"
Name Views and CommentsDate
Vyom good work... very well developed and very gripping at the same time... i loved the characterization of the 2 brothers... the mafia guys could have been a lil better but not bad... loved the dialogues...

end... i think jim wud shoot joe... but wud love to hear what u had thought		 8/22/2009
peter Very cool 5/24/2009
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