Betrayal

The two closest people to George have betrayed him and that will cost them their lives.
Comments on article "Betrayal"
Name Views and CommentsDate
MIRANDA KOOL 5/25/2009
VEE MS 601 I LIKE IT 5/8/2009
shawn so boring that i gradually got happier as i got to the end 4/28/2009
the terminator shotguns are very long. they don't even fit into rifle hand bag things. unless this guy is really tall, there is no way he could have fit it under his jacket... 4/21/2009
soccerchick still enjoy it 4/13/2009
amy the story was very interesting and stright to the point 4/1/2009
ANNE MOLI GOOD STORY,,,KEEP IT UP DUDE 3/25/2009
Amber i think it was a really good story. 3/23/2009
kanupriya it was ok kinda story but the end was obvious 3/10/2009
eskay nice twist 2/28/2009
Barack JoMama There was one grammatical error "of" was used incorrectly when you meant to use "off." 2/27/2009
Selim Really good story with a cool ending. 2/22/2009
kk oh my god, how harrible 2/9/2009
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