At night IT comes
It will always stay with you...
| Comments on article "At night IT comes" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| pavi |
fine thinking and i like the climax with a positive move |
5/6/2009 |
| watever |
ya it was good and enjoyable!with a lot os suspense and wonder! GOOD WORK! |
5/2/2009 |
| roxxie |
realy good i liked it realy scary but not to scary i lked it and cant wait for part 2 |
4/6/2009 |
| Ty James |
fo 2 jt-web-design.7forum.biz and cheak out my forum post it on there plz and ill make the same poll its great m8 |
3/12/2009 |
| angelo |
it was thrilling 2 me |
3/5/2009 |
| nikkib |
Dude you should know Stephen King already did this, even down to the name. |
3/4/2009 |
| jesus |
I could make it, but...hesitation. why, the door is just there within reach, my opportunity to escape just a few easy steps, but I hesitate. my puny mind needs to know the true face of this monster. I'd waited many a lonely night in that cupboard waiting for IT to return, pondering its form, only for silence. It never came. and now it was here I was gonna run away? no, no more running, no more waiting... I was gonna find out and tonights the night. I remember theres a torch in the desk and its like something clicks inside of me, a hidden instinct from the past, the hunter within. I can smell IT now, and I like it. My animal passion builds up inside and I must see it now. 'Come on you monster! I shout ripping off my top and slicing into my chest with the a stapler. blood trickles from the small scratch and I hear IT. ITs stopped moving, Its watching me there in the dark, I know it, pondering my actions. A figure moves slowly towards me. I turn on the torch, its weak beem just penetrating the darkness. I can just make it out, its head is huge, about 2 metres in circumference at least. and its bald. suddenly I realise how stupid I've been but its too late, the end is nigh as they say. I stand shaking with fear and also excitement...and out of the dark creeps Boy George.
the end. |
2/12/2009 | |
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