The Thirst

It flows within us all
Comments on article "The Thirst"
Name Views and CommentsDate
udontneedtoknow greattt description here 5/26/2009
pavi fine descriptions yar! 5/6/2009
tracy If your character is supposed to be a vampire than cool, but you cant really tell. I hope you continue because overall i liked it 4/28/2009
Rafa it was nice, just not for me, sorry =) and a pit too short to understand everything. 4/16/2009
nikkib Uh, no. First of all, unless the blood has started to clot it will not be the consistency of honey and it contains a large percentage of NaCl (salt).
Also, I didn't know anyone's eyes made noise as they rolled around in their sockets.		 3/4/2009
Twilight Yeah it was like that...just like jacking off 1/31/2009
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