Amnesia - Chapter 4
Comments on article "Amnesia - Chapter 4"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| Sara | i like it | 1/31/2011 |
| Mr. meaty | Your story was too short you could have made it longer. over all it was alright. | 8/21/2009 |
| hassan | its like the story is rushed ... u reached out nd started the story wid a wide approach .. sumhow u managed to finish it off though it rather feels like being snubbed at ... take ur time nd write a story ... uve got it in u ... keep it Up :D xoxox | 7/1/2009 |
| kanu | Hmmm i dont knw what to say! | 6/29/2009 |
| Diplomat | aww- that was so sweet | 6/15/2009 |
| minie hitler | ha ha this is a story! | 6/6/2009 |
| Janet | Hey, your storyline is pretty good, but your chapters are too short and condensed. If you made your chapters longer and much more descriptive, it would make your story more interesting. A good attempt altogether- I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story! | 4/10/2009 |
| catherine | hmmm...not a very good ending | 3/10/2009 |
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