Amnesia - Chapter 4
Being lost and your love one helps you.
| Comments on article "Amnesia - Chapter 4" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Mr. meaty |
Your story was too short you could have made it longer. over all it was alright. |
8/21/2009 |
| hassan |
its like the story is rushed ... u reached out nd started the story wid a wide approach .. sumhow u managed to finish it off though it rather feels like being snubbed at ... take ur time nd write a story ... uve got it in u ... keep it Up :D xoxox |
7/1/2009 |
| kanu |
Hmmm i dont knw what to say! |
6/29/2009 |
| Diplomat |
aww- that was so sweet |
6/15/2009 |
| minie hitler |
ha ha this is a story! |
6/6/2009 |
| Janet |
Hey, your storyline is pretty good, but your chapters are too short and condensed. If you made your chapters longer and much more descriptive, it would make your story more interesting. A good attempt altogether- I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story! |
4/10/2009 |
| catherine |
hmmm...not a very good ending |
3/10/2009 | |
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