Amnesia - Chapter 4

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Sara i like it 1/31/2011
Mr. meaty Your story was too short you could have made it longer. over all it was alright. 8/21/2009
hassan its like the story is rushed ... u reached out nd started the story wid a wide approach .. sumhow u managed to finish it off though it rather feels like being snubbed at ... take ur time nd write a story ... uve got it in u ... keep it Up :D xoxox 7/1/2009
kanu Hmmm i dont knw what to say! 6/29/2009
Diplomat aww- that was so sweet 6/15/2009
minie hitler ha ha this is a story! 6/6/2009
Janet Hey, your storyline is pretty good, but your chapters are too short and condensed. If you made your chapters longer and much more descriptive, it would make your story more interesting. A good attempt altogether- I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story! 4/10/2009
catherine hmmm...not a very good ending 3/10/2009
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