| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Whooo |
not bad... not bad |
8/17/2009 |
| Cody |
my. new. hero.
I love your work.
Reading your stories has become an obsession of mine. keep doing what you`re doing, because it`s obviously working! |
7/21/2009 |
| Chinhead |
Rosco? Rosco McQueen? if thats you i'll rip your balls out through your eyeballs.
I'll say just 3 words on this: NOT full penetration. and i want the keys to the mystery machine back, you had no right, man. |
6/1/2009 |
| Ally:) |
Waaahhh...*sniff sniff. That was kinda sad. He (didn't) kill his family. or did he? or did he become crazy? poor guy |
3/26/2009 |
| the1whocounts |
You really need to get a life or write properly, so that people will like this! |
3/24/2009 |
| forgottendreamr |
Sometimes those voices can say some awfully strange things...sometimes we can agree with some crazy (blip), I'll tell you. Stuff we never thought we'd do. |
3/24/2009 |
| 2 hot 4 ya |
i thought it was quite imteresting however it should be a little longer with more detail of why he is in there and maybe adjust the ending. little too boring. need something original and horrofic maybe he beets the guards and gets free that way. |
2/19/2009 |
| Ravenhawk |
"One thing, a memory still vivid and bright in my head. I can imagine her kiss now, the sweet taste of passion lingering on the bottom of my lips"
Reading this aloud brings that same taste of passion to my lips... |
1/22/2009 |
| Rosco |
Isn't that sin city?
you are a hack. |
1/20/2009 |
| fudgepacker68 |
i thort it was a bit stilted and not very scary coz i new he was gonna die dont ask me why i see death in the future but i do
i would like a story about incest now |
1/20/2009 |
| Lischo Pine |
Wonderful...but was the memory of the kiss necessary? No fear in that.. |
1/19/2009 |
| Roxxie |
now THAT...is textbook comedy writing
you should all take note, this guy knows how to do it rite |
1/19/2009 |
