Happy Birthday (To Me)

Nobody remembered my birthday this year... Nobody except ME!
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Robert Taylor Hi Ben.

I'm a film student at the University of Hertfordshire and I really enjoyed the story. We were asked as part of our course to find a short story and adapt it into a script for us to film. I'd really appreciate it if you would let me use your story. It's only going to be used for educational purposes and will not be used comercially. If you have any problems or questions (or would like to read the screenplay) please e-mail me at robertftaylor(at)hotmail.co.uk.

Thanks,

Robert Taylor
11/20/2009
Afrooz I like it. 11/13/2009
tammy that was a grea short story ben. do you have any others 10/26/2009
chaz funny well written! 5/2/2009
Janin i loved the story it had sarcasm, black humor and just perfectly came together. 4/29/2009
Debbie The ending is funny, but da before parts...I'm not so sure. 3/13/2009
Ben too depressed by the theme to laugh at the fun. 3/9/2009
Euz The story was a thrilling but also simplistic story , because it didn't explain well at the end ... for example:

"I could always soil myself and then pretend to have a massive heart attack, hoping to be rushed out in an ambulance, whereupon I experience a miraculous recovery during the drive to the hospital."

all of that text didn't explain the true ending after all, and the story was from one point to the other as in :

you get up.
you have break fast.
you have an accident .
and then you steal a 20$ bill off the seat.

and there you have your story ... but i know that it was only ment to be a short story ...

after all good story :)
3/3/2009
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