My Murderer Wife -Part 1
Truly sadistic and disturbing...
| Comments on article "My Murderer Wife -Part 1" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| sam H |
its really good piece and I particularily enjoyed the last part of the story. Well done |
7/12/2009 |
| forgottendreamr |
Ooh, I like that. It makes you wonder, what happened much later? I like the story, strangely perfect and real... |
3/23/2009 |
| Adam |
I'm un-sure, what is it that you're trying to focus on here? Is it the way love persuades a man to do what he never thought he could? Because at the moment it seems like you have some issues which need to be resolved, though for this to be conveyed in a story...well done. |
1/20/2009 |
| Rikki |
i agree wif shannon i dont think this is normal for a boy of 16 to be imagining. i know a great guy he'll sort you out
the premise was flimsy at best and i think you need to maybe downplay the mad insanity side coz i wasnt sure if it was real or not |
1/19/2009 |
| Shannon |
Wow i am speechless...that was very well writen but kind of a horrible story...I am so sorry for you Richard McLaren for all the things you have been through. Yours Truly Shannon |
1/14/2009 |
| roxxie |
the story is great love the creepyness of it |
1/12/2009 | |
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