Johnny's Girl

The idea for this story came, as so many do, when standing in line waiting for the light rail one morning. The best stories just come to you, and this one is an example of this. My brain goes off on weird tangents sometimes, and this is the product of a thought I had that day. I wondered what would happen if I jumped in front of a train. I hope you all enjoy this one. I had a blast writing it.
Comments on article "Johnny's Girl"
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jess Great story! Kept good pace till the very end! :) I liked the count down till the train would hit him. 10/27/2009
Eva So good! Congratulations! 8/17/2009
abby I love it! Very nice, very captivating. I liked all of it! You're awesome! 8/3/2009
Deidre I give it a 10/10. this was really good. not a story i would easily forget. 6/25/2009
wteva. whoa dude! THAT WAS AWSOME MAN! GIRL U GOTTA GO I MEAN THAT WAS VERY COOL! I WANT MORE LIKE THESE...!SERIOUSLY IT WAS AMAZING! U ACTUALLY MADE A TEAR COME OUT OF MA EYE! *GLAD* 5/3/2009
crazy nikki Wow this is really good, I really like it. Great Job! 2/12/2009
Claudia dude wth? :( so sad. cant deny however that i loved it. his insanity is...in a way ironic. reminds me of Poe. :) 2/5/2009
bigbudmeg Wow! Sarah, if you wanted to involve your reader you achieved your goal. It was totally captivating, It was not just a story it was an experience, a terrifying one. Very well done, I hope you write more, you have an obvious talent please share it with all of us. 1/10/2009
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