| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Mike |
a bit short in my opinion. it's only my opinion though. |
5/13/2009 |
| Denise |
It's like a haiku. |
4/30/2009 |
| ANNA |
This poem is definitely short and aweet and to the point! |
4/28/2009 |
| Belle |
It's short but nice. |
3/1/2009 |
| GTLUVRIDING |
It's gorgeous |
2/5/2009 |
| jonaya |
its cool |
1/27/2009 |
| Quiet Early I. |
You see simple things made by love itself, "Rather than man alone." Your admiration, is short and sweet to some at best perhaps. To me, "This has a reason for perhaps that very day best to even more than you alone." The pinch of salt is needed many places. You needed this as much as I did perhaps best for that day.
Now, "That day will live on simply best." I don't know what we would do in life, without the pinch of salt best even alone, least all else to some, but yet still needed, someday best perhaps with you. Love simply goes like the skies very many places with you best as well !
Keep your thoughts cloudy, as they make way beyond the fog, as the love is there to guide you best with where you end up, "Perhaps not planed for the best of life to them or what it is, to them, for you to see, to study best, for life better for us all."
To see it best, and make the best of it, for you are there, and not alone, to be for them as well with, later best too perhaps, with your help. Thanks for helping poetically, and simple to leave room for our spirit unto the love in yours. |
1/10/2009 | |
