Fatal Attraction

When wires that are not meant to be crossed get crossed...
Comments on article "Fatal Attraction"
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Somebody The beginning was great, but it dragged on a bit when she went through into the room to change.
I have a feeling that the figure opening the door while make things really interesting tho :)		 1/17/2009
Alimah wow again this will be one of my fav stories on this site. Please continue. Hope this story is even better than "When it's meant to be." Can't wait to read more :) 1/7/2009
Vamp Historian GO GIRL...WRITE MORE... WE ARE WAITING! 1/7/2009
Miniman I'M WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE! PLEASE HURRY ! I ADMIRE YOUR STORIES! THEY ARE SO GOOD!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-miniman		 1/1/2009
milton264 this story has major potential please continue onto the next chapter!

great work =P		 12/30/2008
Nadin wow
would this be considered an excert of your story or the start
maybe you should have a clearer introduction
but i loved it, the tittle is cathy=)		 12/29/2008
Micky The language style used is age appropriate considering the characters. Very much high school clique oriented, which can be often over used but I don't feel like that with this story. I like Ebony with her casual outwardly boyish image yet with distinctly female elements when she dances.

I would definitely like to know how she deals with the presence of the unknown individual.		 12/29/2008
Grace oh man that was so good! i want more! 12/29/2008
celeste keep going! i love it! You hav serious talent! 12/28/2008
Amy H WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! XDD
THAT WAS AMAZING! =DDD
I LOVED IT SO MUCH! SERIOUSLY!
YOU SHOULD KEEP THE STORY GOING! WHICH WAS WHAT I VOTED, HAHA. XD
KEEP UP THE MAGNIFICENT WORK! ((:		 12/28/2008
Christine heck yeah! i absolutely love your stories, your last one was amazing! but i don't think it sounds anything like Step Up 2 i can't wait to see what happens! 12/28/2008
Ap dude this sounds really good. please keep going! 12/27/2008
latoya I seriously love all your stories and your an amazing writer!
This story sounds awesome already!
Ill keep on reading		 12/27/2008
Kit hmmm... okay, it's pretty good. i still want to read it to see what happens next... but... street dancing and salsa? sounds exactly like Step Up 2- The Streets. all they did was street dance, and the other dance was salsa at that party. Maybe come up with something a little more original? It bugs me when a story sounds really similar to another one. 12/27/2008
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