Night of Terror

Mae Kenneth lives in Lewistown, Montana and against better judgment, goes with classmates to an old bank to race the elevators at night. What she doesn't know is that a man is following. Will she get out safely and escape the man's murderous task?........okay, so the beginning drags some. leading up to when they enter the building is kinda boring.....but please, please tell me if you like....

Comments on article "Night of Terror"

Name	Views and Comments	Date
vittoria	sort of good... needs to get a twist in the tale now... XD	5/19/2009
j-hamby	yea id like to read more though seems like it will get better	4/6/2009
Patsy Hood	Well written. Uses few words to depict a lot. (That's the way you should do it, I'm told.) Wish I could write like that.	3/23/2009
kisten mccarly	your story rocks.your story is cool and exciting but it was not a scary story. please write a scary story and maybe l can send another comment if you write a scary story.	3/19/2009
Deepashree	It was too good...	1/19/2009

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