Split in the Head
The bizarre case of a bizarre man...
| Comments on article "Split in the Head" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| the judge |
REALLY DON'T LIKE THIS |
3/24/2009 |
| yourbestfriend |
Why would you write such a thing! You're strangely abnormal and not in a good way! |
3/24/2009 |
| forgottendreamr |
A split personality. Dang. It would be insane to have a split personality...I don't know if I'd be able to live with it. Poor Adrian/Matthew. But I feel the most sorry for Matthew, honestly...even though he killed his own parents and himself by meaning to kill Adrian. Because Matthew loved Kristine also. And Matthew was the one who found out that his 'best friend' had been screwing with his girl. And then he came home and found the woman he loved dead and his 'best friend' who had been sleeping with the woman he loved as the culprit...And then trying to kill his 'best friend' and ending up killing himself! Poor, poor split personality... I don't know why I find that funny. I really don't know, but I feel like laughing...for no reason... |
3/23/2009 |
| josh e |
awesome man |
2/24/2009 |
| kirsty |
i wud liek it if it was longer but i didnt like the ending much it was too abrupt and that. you should flesh the characters more i rekkon
i think you cud do one about incest that would intrest me more than this |
1/19/2009 |
| dirk slazenger |
it was good and scary like a horror story should b but i don't like get the end bit. it scared me but i dont no y rly lols
i'd publish it if i had a magazine or a publishing company but i dont lols |
1/18/2009 |
| gwen |
very nice..original concept. flesh it out and you would have a real winner; don't overlap with the Dark Half, tho! |
12/29/2008 |
| Richard Mclaren |
how about 'He made me'? |
12/22/2008 |
| MySpace Founder |
ur title makes me cringe |
12/21/2008 | |
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