| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Crying Rose |
well, Tom Nicholson, is that a hint of jealousy i detect? the story was well written. he's 17, how do you expect him to write? this is the way young authors like us develop our writing and improve! get a life! what's him listening to metal have a bad impact on his writing?! Richard, i like your stories, continue- i love stories like this! well done |
10/7/2009 |
| Whooo |
i really like it.. she deserves that haha. but i think its better if she saw you and then she regretted that thing that she done and plede for forgiveness. |
8/17/2009 |
| Ashleighhh,, xo |
An incredibly well written story. The depth and passion included in this story knows no bounds. Very much one of my favourites. I am an aspiring author and i urge you to continue you writing for people like me. Well done! |
8/15/2009 |
| gh |
hmmm..interesting, very interesting. |
3/25/2009 |
| Tom Nicholson |
I hate it, our description and range of adjectives is mediocre at best and 're a lanky boy who doesn't wash and lsitens to metal music |
3/24/2009 |
| yourbestfriend |
You're different, aren't you! |
3/24/2009 |
| forgottendreamr |
Wow. This is a really talented and interesting piece. You are a very good writer, and the story is really creative. I like it, in that different way. |
3/23/2009 |
| hatchet |
Out of all the stories dude...This was the best. Ver well written almost like a story poem. |
2/27/2009 |
| Ravenhawk |
i can't stop reading your stories, i've become fixated to the point i am logging on every night to check i haven't missed a new one.
I only wish there was something i could do to get in touch with you, you sound like my kind of man, sometimes I dream you're not as normal as you say in your profile and are infact disturbed, insane, and beautiful.
keep writing, and i shall think i have found true love.
xx |
1/22/2009 |
| George |
Well I have to say, I have enjoyed your stories for a while, I especially have enjoyed the tales of "My Murderer Wife", yet I feel I should express some concern about this yarn in particular. I am from punxsutawney, a small town in America and this story describes an actual incident in our home town perfectly, it even includes some details not released to the press.
My father, the town attourney, has read these stories and has agreed you seem to be a rather disturbed individual. Though I am sure it is just a coincedence, I must enquire as to your whereabouts in America, as my Father reminds me, I must report even my suspicions to my police as fingerprints were found on the knife, which were not consistent with what was first thought to be the male's own.
I will be in touch. |
1/20/2009 |
| avatarboy6 |
you've got issues man.
you need to see a shrink. |
1/20/2009 |
| Nick Thompson |
i think its definitely real roxxie, this did actually happen i heard in a chainmail they neva lie
this is deep stuff, like jean-paul sartre or beaudelaire but on ketamine |
1/18/2009 |
| roxxie |
is this story real |
1/12/2009 |
| samnatha |
this is really good, i love it, totally the kind of thing i would buy to read myself |
1/2/2009 |
| Kingfan |
Nice, very nice! Gives all us closet cheaters a a nasty wrenching feeling in our guts, which means you have written it well! |
12/29/2008 |
| jr |
this is deep |
12/19/2008 |
