Fields of Death

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Darrell I think this is the third 1st person story that kills off the narrator. Doesn't that strike you as a bit ridiculous to have a dead person telling the story. How are they telling this story? I didn't leave comments on the others that have done this because they didn't write very well, so they were going to stink no matter what. However, you are able to convey an idea very intelligibly, so think about what your audience when you are telling them a story. 7/21/2010
forgottendreamr How many times did you delete your sound effect (of the scythe coming down) before you submitted your story? I just want to know how many times. 3/23/2009
josh cool 2/24/2009
S could have been developed more. 2/17/2009
Dirk Slazenger i agree wit roxxie this kid's got talent.

get your face out there, no need to be sheepish		 1/20/2009
Roxxie liked the setting, made me think of England, one of my FAVORITE European countries, except for scotland and france and russia and vietnam (thats in europe rite?)

bit short tho and i like long sentences		 1/19/2009
Nick Thompson i like your short sentence structures, they remind me powerfully of carol ann duffy, another proponent of the classic dramatic monoluge structure. however, you seem to be the terrifying midpoint between carol ann duffy and charles manson 1/18/2009
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