Mutant's Story (Draft Three)
Comments on article "Mutant's Story (Draft Three)"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| Raven | next chapter? | 11/4/2009 |
| Christine | Why don't you ever continue your stories ? | 3/29/2009 |
| abbs | totally continue this is an awesome thing | 1/26/2009 |
| kris | this has a really great story line, but im thinking you should make it longer to add thoughts and more reactions, description about surroundings that could give the reader a better idea of what's going on...but good job, keep it up! | 1/4/2009 |
| p.bo | yea its gettin there but i think its too short. stories that i read on buzzle are longer. |
12/21/2008 |
| 24/7 reader | ur story iz good but i just wish it waz longer and it had some history because this part doesnt really make since 2 me. | 12/13/2008 |
| J | Perhaps have more than a few lines for each part. | 12/5/2008 |
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