Mutant's Story (Draft Three)
Continuing with the story...sorry guys it’s still short. I’m working on using a PC for a longer entry.
| Comments on article "Mutant's Story (Draft Three)" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Raven |
next chapter? |
11/4/2009 |
| Christine |
Why don't you ever continue your stories ? |
3/29/2009 |
| abbs |
totally continue this is an awesome thing |
1/26/2009 |
| kris |
this has a really great story line, but im thinking you should make it longer to add thoughts and more reactions, description about surroundings that could give the reader a better idea of what's going on...but good job, keep it up! |
1/4/2009 |
| p.bo |
yea its gettin there but i think its too short.
stories that i read on buzzle are longer. |
12/21/2008 |
| 24/7 reader |
ur story iz good but i just wish it waz longer and it had some history because this part doesnt really make since 2 me. |
12/13/2008 |
| J |
Perhaps have more than a few lines for each part. |
12/5/2008 | |
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