The Thoughts and Actions of a spirit
A fiction story about a young woman named Emily. She soon discovers what its like to be dead, useless, and unheard.
| Comments on article "The Thoughts and Actions of a spirit" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Angelina P |
Yes i want you to write a second part to this story. Story like these fascinate me!... |
4/15/2009 |
| baby girl |
I loved it! |
12/17/2008 |
| lau |
beacuse your too young to be a writer, you use the word "then too much. the sentencesare short and you need to improve your literacy skills before you write anything else.
but on a good note, the story has a good structure so well done :) |
12/9/2008 |
| kacy |
y do u use emily again n again ,,it sounds odd. cant u jus say she/her?nywayz nice concept! |
12/8/2008 | |
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