Element Fairies

A seventeen years old, Jasmine, never knew any mysterious gaps in her past and what lies ahead of her. She doesn’t know her destiny until she meant a fairy that changes her life. Read what happen to her and you’ll find out it soon enough…
Comments on article "Element Fairies"
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meg The storyline is good so far but the perspective is confusing. You need to decide in what perspective you are writing in, first person or third person. Also, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes, try profreading. Other than that, it is pretty good. 12/4/2008
Lakiaya young Nice. Really good i like it...hope to see the next one soon! :) 11/12/2008
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