Broken

A poem about a girl walking on the side of the street reading a break up text message. This poem was made to show how she felt at the time.
Comments on article "Broken"
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jess it is really good and it has a lot of emousions in it which is really goo i really liked it it brings me back to when my ex biyfriend broke up with me just for someone else i really loved him and we wrere going to ger married but we didnt because he left me for som fat ugly chick now i know i can do better than i did with him i am happy and i have moved on from him 9/18/2009
chica it ws very boring and it didnt make much sense 9/9/2009
alex nyc kid 9/4/2009
vanessa lov u This just happen 2 me just right now I can't believe this been wit him 4 3yrs n all he do is text n said that he has some1 else it hurtz me so bad 7/27/2009
tong xiong i like it more people do that 6/16/2009
crazygirl[AZ] nice poem 5/27/2009
lizbeth i love this poem!that is wat i am talking about! 4/29/2009
chrissi it really doesnt say anything 4/28/2009
Corey I like the poem but I don't like the cuss word in the poem 4/25/2009
William Shatner This was so dumb. Nooo liiiieee.

Work on your poetry,
4/21/2009
christina well i did liked it but it just needs a little of more sentimental for someone dat your going to hurt 4/8/2009
miley i hate it 3/13/2009
Ally It was good but would be better if it was a little longer 3/5/2009
yessica it started okay but no it just started cussing heck no and if you want to be a poety stay in skool and quit trying to okay sorry but no you are voted off the writting show try it again 2/13/2009
emily bauman your retared to say f u to someone when they thought it was time for you guys to part duh duh "there is other fish in the sea grab a fishing pole and start fishing" Duh duh 1/27/2009
shylee this poem is wat i want to say to my ex 1/12/2009
christina omg i love it! 12/16/2008
BREANNA GURL YOU GOT TALENT KEEP UP THE POEMS 12/10/2008
shelby i think this was really good. 12/3/2008
tracey i like it cause i can relate 11/24/2008
Jessica S. Honestly I have never dated or had my heart brocken. I was
just exsperimenting with the poem. Yeah, I was a little mad.
And I am not that good. at poems. Just wanted to exsperiment.
Thanks for reading it enjoying or hating it!
11/23/2008
Janet Teenage love, that is what this poem represents not to mention an inexperienced author. 11/21/2008
Alex Rabesca i LOVE what you wrote
& i'll show this to my ex

because he won't leave me alone
11/14/2008
Cirston Dne' She apparently has a broken heart but shes holding back on her feelings in her poem. 11/14/2008
stace its a horrible feeling... that happened to me a while back 11/4/2008
Nicole It was okay, but did u write this when u were mad 10/30/2008
Alicia it is the best thing ever 10/5/2008
ApRIL i loved it keep writing 10/2/2008
Jessica Singler Thanks for the comments.
I know I am not much of A GREAT writer.
But It time I hope I can become better, Thanks everyone. :]
10/1/2008
sarah i didn't like the begining of it to much but the end of it was ok. 9/30/2008
LesllieA y talk about his. it dose not express how u feel deep ehuff. share a little more pain or frustraition 9/30/2008
awesome this is exactly how i feel about what he did... 9/29/2008
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