Behind Blue Eyes- Chapter Two

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Comments on article "Behind Blue Eyes- Chapter Two"
Name Views and CommentsDate
B that is disgusting .. taking the eyes as a prize possession or something ..
but its a great story so far !
5/10/2009
mAtt Not bad. The only thing I didn't like is that it was over way too fast. I think you should fit in more detail and make it a tad bit longer. I will continue to read. Once again, do not give up. 12/16/2008
pollywog can't wait to read the rest... 11/25/2008
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