Game of Death

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ECOFLY. Kinda long story and yeah...i think it be more fun to give the little girl a knife and tell her if you cut your legs off i will let your sis live but if you cut her legs off i will let you both live...we both know she wont do it so at the end...both loose there legs :) 6/13/2010
Stephanie W Wow I swear I almost peed myself wen I read this nice going Ireally like it 6/4/2009
KuroVXIIINoctis ...-facepalm- Despite the entire fact that it was ripped off, It was pretty good. I need to learn to not be biased. 5/14/2009
gibeog amazing...absolutley amazing...
i dont see you as insane, i see this as a beautiful poem...yet so disturbing...
brilliant...speechless, amazing..		 10/30/2008
SaBrina wow that was crazy, nd its funny cuz only people like the gurl in this story would read this nd you say
I came to tell you that it is your turn.
My friend, I would like to play a game...
wow		 10/13/2008
wolf i like the sound of this game 9/26/2008
Leo Mylonas This poem was extreamly well written; i wanted to hear more. Great work Ian, keep it up . I hope to see more form you. 9/17/2008
Jaw Amazingly written. Kind of creepy, but a very good story. Its like saw except a poem. 9/5/2008
Kim I think the poem was great! It kept me on the edge of my seat! I wold love to hear more of your brilliant work! I does kind of remind me of a movie. But I really loved it! 9/5/2008
Da Emo 911 Excellent! Simply brilliant and satisfying to my darker, sicker self :) 9/3/2008
Shannon That was unbelievably awesome. 8/31/2008
Amanda Brown WOW that is good, one of the best I have seen in a good.

(facebook amanda brown)		 8/29/2008
Steven That is profound to all extents. I commend you in writing it. Your stylistics of story telling are very interesting as it instantly made me voracious for the rest of the poem. I think the tortuous style of the text is great and i love the way it gives the older girl a volition.

I believe it's based upon the movie 'Saw' judging by the date of publishment and the story itself. The protagonist is interesting though I wish you had given more detail about her although I can see why it is not necessary. It definatly could set hysteria in somebodies mind if they looked deeply into it and their own life.

However as this is veers most verbose I shall end it. As I said I comend your highly laudable writing style and please do write more. Congratulations on a fantastic poem.		 8/28/2008
jean this article is amazing and u should keep writing because u seem pretty talented at it 8/28/2008
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