Breath Is An Excuse

I wrote this a year ago. About my ex girlfriend who cheated on me.
Comments on article "Breath Is An Excuse"
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Vicky it relates to me alot 7/31/2009
Ameth it was really good, but i believe that you should have made it longer. other than the shortness to it, it was awesome. 12/17/2008
Jessica Really good. You should try writing song lyrics.
I really liked it. : )		 11/23/2008
jr it's okay not that bad 9/5/2008
Arabella I really like it. It was short but good. Keep writing them! And I'll read them. :) 8/11/2008
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