Deserted Beauty

A beautiful scene is depicted in this poem...
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sumit it is good 10/2/2009
Bridget Well...poems are supposed to be beautiful, right? I don't think this one really fits that picture, if you know what I'm saying. The rhyme was bad, and to me, the poem had to much going on in it. Sorry 4/16/2009
miranda S. i liked it .
you should get more into it though.
then you could maybe get one published!		 2/4/2009
riya t it's a lovely and nice poem 8/23/2008
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