Hidden Darkness Revealed
Very interesting, dark, and deep. Read if you like darker writings.
| Comments on article "Hidden Darkness Revealed" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| kyle cote |
i LOVE it its dark and gloomy! your an amazing poet! |
11/17/2009 |
| Eliana |
Very good. Wonderful ending lines, great vocabulary and the picture is all too clear. Good job! |
10/13/2009 |
| Seraphina |
Excellent description. Are you learning Japanese as one of the twenty languages that you wish to learn? I am.
P.S.
Hatred sweeps across the land to those it finds unworthy.
Torment.
Torture.
Feel it's fiery sting.
Satan doesn't exist.
It is your own mortal sin that consumes you.
Darkness drips from your very aura.
Believe and you shall be set.
Ignore and you shall suffer. |
9/18/2009 |
| megan loeffert |
i really loved ur poem it remided me of then i was at my deepest point of my depression |
8/20/2009 |
| stricknine |
i think this poem reflects a person beeing austrosized by his or her peers. not feeling a connection, rather than wallow in ones self pitty for not beeing accepted. they allienate those who do not accept and every one else for that matter. it is easier to hate and have disgust than it is to ascimilate. this is what i got out of it. i really enjoyed this poem. |
8/16/2009 |
| pareesh |
gothic man |
8/14/2009 |
| Elton |
Awesomely written! Deep and dark... I like it |
6/29/2009 |
| Blaine Emberlin |
It was wonderful, it inspired me, and I'm sure it will inspire many others. |
5/21/2009 |
| Lxarada |
Kool |
4/30/2009 |
| liam o'b |
awesome.nuff said. |
4/28/2009 |
| raheem' |
das wats up i need help with mys u think u can help me |
3/26/2009 |
| joseph |
sounds like someone got married |
3/22/2009 |
| Amanda |
very good.I enjoyed it.keep writing,cause it may help others be inspired. |
2/3/2009 |
| Robert |
This poem was freaking awesome. Good job. |
12/23/2008 | |
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