A Poem
PLEASE tell me what you think...
| Comments on article "A Poem" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| JAIME |
WELL IS SO COOL I GIVE A +A |
10/22/2008 |
| Courtney |
wow! your very strong! |
8/16/2008 |
| Patti |
I'm so sorry you went through this! I've been there myself. If you need ANYTHING e-mail me! (by the way the rest of you WILL be marked and reported as spam!) |
8/13/2008 |
| Tiffyz |
That was good
It kinda reminds me of the realationship I was in
It brings hope for others
Thanx |
7/21/2008 |
| Bahbrah |
Good for you! ("...WATCH me...") 'Sounds like he needs a psychiatric evaluation, and then some serious meds. They tell me that this is a plane of friction--that we learn BECAUSE it's hard...but JEEZum...
(Ma once said, "What--'you got a bone to pick with God?" And I said, "I 'got a whole SKELeton...") If you're looking for criticism: too bad. It's good. The second-to-the-last "couplet" sounds a little like prose; but it's REAL--and that shines through...the last of a harsh and indirect light... |
6/26/2008 |
| flaca |
i guess u went through a lot when you rote this poem.
i no exactly what you feel. |
6/16/2008 |
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