Vision of Blood
Not all people have visions. Not all visions come true. So what made this one so special?
| Comments on article "Vision of Blood" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| rarranskyy |
OMGOMGOMG I WAS THERE! dude that was sooo awsome i loved it, it was THE best orgaism i had ever we should of had more dudes there man it was sweet... if there more dudes i think it would be better... anyways i gotta go later! |
5/15/2009 |
| zachary |
k guys you actually have to see it from my perspective... IT WAS INTENSE we were passing gas in each others noses and it was crazy i loved it and she loved it... then my friends came over and they joined us and we had one crazy intense orgasim |
5/15/2009 |
| zachary |
that was soo bad that i threw up a little while kissing my girlfriend and she thought it was nasty and we got into some crazy kinky cool throw up stuff... it was intense |
5/15/2009 |
| allie |
i dont get the ending! |
12/17/2008 |
| alondra torres |
i think your story is COOL! |
12/17/2008 |
| missy |
Work on grammer. Like the word 'sail' it should be 'sale'
But i loved this story |
12/4/2008 |
| random |
wait is it over?! its so good...except i didn't get the last line about the extra miles? can someone explain that? |
10/24/2008 |
| Raven |
Fantastic! firstly i love reading stories that are first person and secondly MAN! its so unexpectedly twisting and so many things happen in just er.. didnt count the para's but u got the point right?
although i didnt understand how its a vision ... i mean does that mean his wife is alive and wat he saw was a vision? except that teh story was awesome. a cool 9 |
9/30/2008 |
| katy bugg |
SWEEET! i luved it! |
9/26/2008 |
| teiinah |
this story is so cool but so scary also i loved it so much hope to read the next one. |
9/9/2008 |
| Chi |
Oh and dont listen to IDebate its probably just sum hubristic person who puts people down cus they feel like it. git... |
9/5/2008 |
| Chi |
oh my gosh its 3 in the morning here and i honestly feel scared lol! thats y i gave it a ten, and i cant wait for more. |
9/5/2008 |
| iDebate |
Uhhhhhh, lame. so many typos and badd spelinng i could hardly read it also u had punctuationn me son and me and my family its suppose to go my family and i. WHEN DID U GET PAST 3rd GRADE!?!?!?!?
P.S. only good part i thought, was the ending the question, funny. |
7/8/2008 | |
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